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7th Dec 2019, 9:00 AM in chapter 5
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c_rberus 7th Dec 2019, 9:00 AM edit delete
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[page description & captions]

[a close-up of the giant figure, all of its eyes watching lick. lick's shadow becomes penetrated by the bleached silhouettes of the teeth.
dusty: "lick... i'm sorry. i didn't think it mattered. i thought i knew better, and i'm sorry!"]
[the fangs descend the lengths of the trees and come from all sides, starting to bite into lick's fur and pull them upward.
dusty: "let's go back!"]
[lick loses grip on dusty. they can't speak but are reaching down desperately as they are lifted higher, claws extended. dusty yells, anguished.
dusty: "no...! let's find a way to move the train..."]
[lick barely grabs onto dusty's frame, pulling them upward. dusty stares up at them mournfully.
dusty: "please...!"]

Comments:

jim 7th Dec 2019, 11:43 AM edit delete reply
the visuals here are just so cool... like it's terrible that this is happening to them but also the execution is so powerful
c_rberus 7th Dec 2019, 3:08 PM edit delete reply
c_rberus
háw'aa (thank you) jim! i've been excited to get to this part in the story for a long time haha