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13th Mar 2021, 10:00 AM in chapter 9

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c_rberus 13th Mar 2021, 10:00 AM edit delete
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[lick keeps running from the tree, illuminated in the distance by ivory flames. a white eye-shaped figure drips down from the fire, staring in lick's direction. lick is fighting off tears. the voice continues speaking:
find your way into the dark, lick]
[they flee further up the bank into darkness, over a hill in the narrow valley of the mountains. evergreen trees surround them everywhere.
follow the sleeping quiet]
[survive.]
avery 14th Mar 2021, 4:48 PM edit delete reply
this is so good... i love your storytelling here. it feels so powerful and the emotions feel so intense. the plot shift is so powerful.
c_rberus 15th Mar 2021, 11:03 AM edit delete reply
c_rberus
thanks avery! so excited to keep carrying everyone through this journey <3
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